User blog comment:Aphrodite Sweetheart/A little bit worried.../@comment-17292221-20131220094426/@comment-4588346-20131223053535

With the "additional info" bits that I added I simply meant more elaboration and detail or perhaps what Rose had suggested. For instance instead of putting "The spell is a green beam." a better thing to put would be "The spell shoots out a bright green burst of energy." The latter example provides a better visual about the spell, the same is of all pages. Instead of saying "Daphne contacts Bloom in her dreams." that sentence would be very boring and instead it would be better to say "Daphne uses her magic to contact Bloom through a strong telepathic bond that they share." Or etc.